To be a good person is not to receive
More commonly it is to give to others
Who need it
with out wanting,
To get something back
Giving to someone wholey
Without expecting something back
Is a good thing to do but someone doing it just...
To get into heaven
They don’t really care
About the people
They are supposably helping
They just care about themselves
And what’s in it for them
Good people help with out expecting
Love without wanting
Trust while accepting
And try without failing
Good people do it anyway
With out looking
For something in return
Like heaven
Author notes
i hope this is ok
great contest
goodluck
A contest entry
- Nonexistant God by MessedupMarionette.
700 points, ended January 4, 2008, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you really think
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This is a good poem, but it's kind of bitter in a weird way. I would've liked to have seen a bit more imagry in here, but otherwise it's really good. Thanks for entering!
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Well done angel,wonderfull poem so much trueth
Good luck i love you
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awwwww
You are so very right. wow I could say a lot about this topic but I will restrain myself
But you are so right. Pure love motivates you to be god to another and love them with no hope of return. That is the only form of real love. Love you lots princess, Daddy
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this is a beautiful write which holds so much truth and faith within your words. well done sissy and best of luck
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This is a very good piece sweety thank you for sharing this with me goodluck to you in the contest best wishes and much love
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