after healing
in hot spray
to change pain
gutless chant
of steam’s quick grab
fingered chilly caution
I wrote, wishing
you’d nick yourself
on my frosty hope
to streak fear
every time
you take another risk
in silencing me
Author notes
Prompt: Imprecation
In a list
A contest entry
- Word Prompt by Rowan.
1500 points, ended December 10, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I'm so glad you entered. Yes... a tight, succinct write, and clever usage of the prompt.
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ty for the bronze my friend. curses don't have to be voiced...
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Nice thinking. Tight poem.
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scary though, huh?
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Great metaphor and imagery in succinct.
Love that ending.
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ty sheltered.
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