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Sweetness

Souls reaching across the
Wide gap of time and space
Each needing the comfort that
Everlasting love has to offer
Time has no meaning, they'll
Never forget the uniqueness of
Every single moment together
So this is the way of first love
Such tenderness and meaning
              - it's love

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  • LilyRose
    December 10, 2007

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    Sweet Memory

    Sweet is the touch and memory of first love where "Time has no meaning " - oh how one can drift unselfishly in the sweet love of this poem to cherish forever.


  • genevieve3
    December 9, 2007
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    absoultly perfect!