I returned to the beginning, to a prison made of valentines.
I can't seem to stop reliving dead moments--
That flash by, like streetlights when driving.
Asked and I received your opinion, although I didn't truly want it.
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Username: twilight seduction
In case I was vague, or to quell questions by readers who don't interpret, just read, this poem deals with bad relationships. I thought the song Heart-Shaped Box dealt with that, at least to an extent, although I don't relate to the strong drug imagery of the song, even though it is very good.
Anyways, to the point: relationships. If you don't get the poem, whoever is reading, reread it with a serious romantic relationship in mind, and it may help. Think "troubled relationship."
A contest entry
- ice and salt on skin by bird-mad girl.
1000 points, ended January 2, 2008, 8 entries
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