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The Mind and Heart Speak

Mind:  Grow up from this situation.
Make a new decision on how to live?
Be givin a self evaluation.
So many feelings need to be dismissed!

Heart: How do you change everything you know?
Evolve and mature in every way?
20 years old still failing to grow,
life is a challenge everyday!

Mind:  What if your affraid of success?
How do you excell and not fail?
Resulting, failure in the flesh.
You are still continueing to bail!

Heart: Can you really ignore the past?
What must be done to turn this life around?
Maybe you should ignore the facts.
Pick me up, the pieces need to be found!

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A few words from the heart and mind... questions and a few answers I might have for myself.... Wishing to understand it all!

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  • Robbwindow
    January 8, 2008
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    good

    Well done, very personal and spirited. I like the way affraid is used as a fact that in the forth stanza is suggested to be ignored, interesting. Also I thoroughly agree with speaking from the heart, it suggests in order to think you have to exercise.


  • WTF-Hatchwork
    December 13, 2007
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    Cool sh*t

    Down with the clown, As my homey had a frown, Cause people are still alive.