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Opening the Tomb


this virgin sepulcre
once it is violated,
we can never claim innocence
in our quest for knowledge
dank smells, like a guardian
assault us with the fragrance of isolation
and the mute voices of bones
tell tales of grief and woe

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  • Grey Mouser
    December 11, 2007

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    Nice take on the prompt, how the ages have hidden much, yet with that first look into the passage we find loss. Thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser