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Sleet

Color is a beautiful and majestic thing.
I'm glad to be able to see it.
I love tintinnabulation in my ears,
Oh, I'm so glad to be able to hear it.

Words to make fun of on a page of manga,
Like,
"She said goodbye.  Her final words are still etched in my memory."
I guess it's not a lot to laugh about,
For those illiterate.
So I can't decide to laugh at things that other people may not be able to even see.

Like saying beauty doesn't matter
If your beautiful in looks.

Oh woe is me,
What shall I do.

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I know, it sucks.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 15, 2007

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    Color is a wonder isn't it? I think of what the world would be like without it and it's not pleasant at all :)) You did well on this piece :D


  • jaykayXD
    December 9, 2007
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    coolio.
    im totally not blessed in the able to write poetry way.