Commercial sentiment bought and sold
no profit in retelling stories of old,
'Tis the season of spiralling debt
I haven't finished paying for last year yet.
A contest entry
- Calling All Christmas Posts by daviscth.
450 points, ended December 20, 2007, 57 entries
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Thank you for entering
A cynical Christmas indeed. I choose though to remember what the true meaning of Christmas is and then it is not so commercialized.
God Bless and Merry Christmas
Tammy
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I like this.
It ended perfectly.
Thank you for your entry,
Best of luck.
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LOL! Who has? Oh, and the year before as well!
Great work with this Christmas poem. I love your
background here and wish you the best of luck
in this contest! Thanks a lot for sharing this!
Jeremy0826 -
I know exactly what you mean. I love the border. Thank you for posting in my contest and all the best luck at judging. Merry Christmas, Cathy
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This is spot on...and I love it! It has a shade of humor to it, but at the same time is sooo saddly true...Well Done!!
Wyatt
xxx
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