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The Oak Re-birthed

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like the massive oak in fall
that pushes off its leaves of old memories
casting down the useless rubish
to be raked into the fire
of forgetfullness

the injured heart
can no longer remember
how rich in green color
or how brightly loves' leaves glowed

yet springtime
comes with new foilage
promise fufilled in new buds

time passes into summer
the oak again dressed in beauty
green fills the vast sky
new love is born
the Oak re-birthed




phto by:www.elebanistaescoces.com/images/The_Mighty_O...

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  • Tam
    December 19, 2007

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    ahhh...

    yes! hope springs eternal...
    this is wonderful penning!
    with your trademark of uplifting wisdom...
    I agree with David...great pic and colors displayed with this beautiful poem...rich in poetic splendor!
    as are you...
    Blessings! Tammy


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      December 19, 2007

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      Thank you Tammy as always for turning my fron upside down! What would I do without my best AP friend? I don't want to know!

      Mary


  • Wilted Rose Bush
    December 9, 2007

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    I like it. It's great. A lovely poem about the cycle of an oak tree. Good structure, good words and well done!

    • SilverButterfly gold member
      December 9, 2007
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      Thank you so much for reading it. I appreciate that!!!!

      GBY
      SilverButterfly

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