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Blushing In Belief - Gold

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In the east, she was sung cherubic choruses,
given gold and frankincense and myrrh
when bore down on truth in body of spirit
in flesh; a child, she brought into the desert
that would teach us peace.  When we came,
pink with promise rubbed on cheeky earth,
we were meant to stand awash, and awed,
in blood stains of this remembrance of birthing.
Mother to mother, this sweet brush of heaven’s hand
leaves me blushing for my portion of innocence.





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Prompt: "Blushing is the color of virtue."
-Diogenes

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  • kaibab silver member
    December 9, 2007

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    Such a Native sage from sAGE TO PAGE...You are proof that loves from freely from skie to grounded eather mother...sent to call us home for supper...lovely work pen friend...


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      December 9, 2007
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      ty dear pen friend. What celebration of womanhood is now...and reason to wish peace more now than ever.


  • poet2angels gold member
    December 9, 2007

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    Wonderful and so amazing !
    The end left me in a sigh....
    Such a beautiful poem created from a simple prompt

    Lynda


  • penman gold member
    December 9, 2007
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    Excellent

    Tremendous visual images you have penned. A very skillful masterpiece. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    December 9, 2007
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    a fresh look at the christmas story..well told good luck xx

    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      December 9, 2007
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      ty Peter. I am snowbound and unwilling to embrace the chill jsut now and so I write and write and write and write

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