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Frothing For Forgiveness

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dirty froth of winter
rescued from seasonal slump
running to mother-lake,
ready with baptism’s forgiveness.





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Prompt contest: January Rain

My own photograph Mill stream

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  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    December 9, 2007
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    lovely photo .i like using my own love your white rapid force in this piece well done peter


  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 9, 2007

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    WOW! Now that was strong and meaningful. Love the metaphor and the ending is wonderful.
    Thank you for entering!

  • Rowan gold member
    December 9, 2007
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    short, succinct, and damn poetic. Excellent.