A smile that lights up a room
Eyes that warm my heart
I don't know about you
But i knew you were the one from the start
Freeing the pain from my soul
I can finally let my true self show
A love like this is hard to find
I'm so thankful to call you mine
I've never felt so alive and free
Please, don't ever let go of me
A contest entry
- I want poems with emotion, by Hope Angel.
380 points, ended December 19, 2007, 31 entries
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Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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I can just imagine the glance across the room and the feelings that were felt. Thanks for entering. Good luck.
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This is such a truly beautiful write. Thank you for entering my contest.
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good poem
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Aw, such a beautiful and sweet piece. I can relate to this alot. Love is amazing and it does free you from pain, and agony. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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I really like this ~ its beautifully said ~ very touching ~ Thanks for entering ~ best of luck to you!
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So beautiful and sweet. Thanks for entering.
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Aw, it's cute.
Thanks for entering!
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awwww this is soo sweet. I know exactly how you feel. It's hard to trust someone enough to give yourself to them. Thank you for entering and good luck!
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That is fresh! Love is exhilarating and liberating. You express this very nicely in your poem. Your choice of words that give these feelings, is excellent!
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Thanks a lot for your entry!
This is such a sweet poem.
Great work with this one and thanks a lot
for entering it into our contest.
Congratulations to you on your trophies
and all the best to you in our contest.
Good luck in all the rest too!
Thanks a lot for sharing this oen here
and keep up the wonderful work!
Jeremy0826 -
Thank you for entering
This is exactly how I feel right now. Well done! Congrats on all the other trophies you have won for this poem! This is so sweet and touching.
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~~~ Thank you very much for entering this beautiful poem… ~~~
I detect some uncertainty but hey, I’m no love doctor. I really enjoyed your poem and I hope that the two of you will have a lovely Valentine’s day.
~~~ Good luck in the contest and hope you enter again ~~~
Becks
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This really does sound like someone special. I know how this feels.
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this was very heartfelt. It was extremely sweet and innocent, very simple, but so meaningful. How so little words can describe a whole emotion. It is truly gorgeous!
I've never felt so alive and free
Please, don't ever let go of me
These two lines, what a way to end a rhyme, so delicate and yet so inspirational. so sweet, so honest, so very thorough!
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Thankyou for entering this write. I appreciate the more simpler style of writing and enjoyed this read. Thank you and good luck in the contest.
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Simple yet beautiful, your flow is great and it's a poem everyone can relate to. Thank you for entering.
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Simply beautifully written. Itsn't like a weight that has been lifted when you can truly be your self with someone what a gift. Good Luck in contest.
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I love this poem! ^_^ It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. :] It's great that you've found someone like this. Thank you for your entry. It's much appreciated. Good luck in the contest.
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I do love your simple but beautiful words...the flow lays so softly on the heart
Thank you so much for sharing with me and for entering
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Very heartfelt and touching! Thank you for sharing this with me! I really liked it!
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AMAZING
This is so beautiful.
i love reading love poems they are so touching and full of raw emotion!
i love this!
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Great poem man, It seems like you have someone special. Congrats!
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I adore this poem. It was easy to relate to and read. I can feeling the emotion dripping from it. My favorite part is:
"A smile that lights up a room
Eyes that warm my heart
I don't know about you
But i knew you were the one from the start
Freeing the pain from my soul
I can finally let my true self show"
There are a few errors, but I can understand what words they are supposed to be, so it's alright with me. Amazing.
Thank you and good luck.
-Dana.
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Wow. That is very good. I really enjoyed reading this. Shows that there is hope out there for us all. Thanks so much for sharing and keep it up.
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thats great
ur a great writer
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aww... that is sooo sweet. Great write, keep writing, best wishes in the contest, and happy holidays!
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This is very good! I really like it. best of luck!!! keep up your amazing work!
Crimson -
TOP NOTCH
THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL EXPRESSION OF THE DESIRE TO FEEL THIS LIFE'S MOST DESIRABLE FEELING, THE LACK OF THIS LIFE SUPPORT RESULTS IN JUST ABOUT ANY NEGATIVE FEELINGS TOWARDS LIFE. VERY BEAUTIFUL
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This is a short and simple entry thanks for entering this piece filled with tenderness and lots of love best of luck
MxA
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This is a short piece. A lot of emotion in such a few words. I can relate to this a lot. Short and simple. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Absolutly beautiful and amazing.
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not to be picky, but light should lights and mind should be mine.
Other than that it was Beautiful! i think its great that people can have this. im still looking. =[ glad you have it love! 
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damn, i didn't notice those until now lol, i gotta fix them...typos drive me nuts, so thank you for pointing them out
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yeah, same here. lol. anytime. <333
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great poem...kept me wanting to read more of it
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This has a wonderful feeling of tender love.
Good luck
~sugar~
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That is a wonderful poem. I felt the love in it as I read each word. Good luck and great job!
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Wow. How do people always find the words that I could say to my boyfriend that I can't find to say to him???? Wow. it's very good! I love it! best of luck in the contests!
Crimson -
Tender
Tender write of open love. Makes me smile to know that you have this in your life, written from within your words simply and beautifully.
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