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in
Dec
ember
I liked you
January I loved you
held you, in my heart
touched you for a while
this year
is January tears
LeeL
Author notes
Love will come, grow, glow, and sometimes, take us to tears
A contest entry
- PIF Prompt Contest by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended December 9, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hi Rick,
I'm not sure I like having December sliced in two like that, but since it's for form's sake I completely understand the reason. Nice, precise thoughts, great form...yep, it gets my stamp of approval.
I have great hopes for you in the coming year, Hon. I'd like it to be full of the love you deserve...
Love and
s
~Julie
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Heathfelt Thoughts
Words of how it began and ended, are always emotional touch the good to the bad. Happiness to sadness, then again it might just be a stepping stone in life to teach us to really value real love. You words are few but the meaning runs deep. You have that knack of writing a volumn in a few lines. You are a masterful poet of love........................novy
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Hi Novy
Just my thoughts
compressed down to a few
I am always learning thru feeling
Thank you for saying Masterfull
Rick
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A wonderful look at a year gone by and the beauty and sorrow found in it...fun how much can truly happen in just one year...from love found to love lost.
Very beautfiul and haert felt.
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Mystic
Pleased you saw it all
So much to say in so few words
and then to end in tears
I thank you
Rick
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And even the star on top!!! So clever ye be!!! Tears suck...but yeah, you are so right!
Smile~
Sue
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Hi Sue
You saw the star as well
The tree just fit the mounth
It was a lovely year, in many ways
Let me try another
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It was a lovely year in some ways...we just have to try and remember that I suppose. From my heart I wish you the very best year ever...with all the happiness you can handle!
{you are so good at these short writes...and to make the words into a shape...just cool}
Sue -
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Thank you Sweety
Rickie
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Rick,
Isn't it amazing to think over a year and see where it takes us...the glory of falling in love at it's peak and the pain of dissappointment at it's bottom...all in a number of months, so much can change.
This makes me want to wipe away your tears.
lovely sad words.
love
Michelle
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Michelle
Your kindness always showes
It is almost... endless
like my thoughts
I thank you
Always
Rick
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