&& she's acting ever so crazy...
Yet, she's hoping on everything that it's better this time,
She's wishing on every shooting star.
She can still feel the tears,
that ran down her cheeks
constantly for the three days they were parted.
It was meant to be so easy. && it..
wasn't.
He wasn't meant to leave her in tatters,
He wasn't meant to react like that.
He was supposed to fight,
fight for her, show her that he meant it
when he said i love you.
She's had the most miserable week,
&& no-one will ever take that away.
She doesn't want to cry anylonger,
or get an aching feeling when someone says his name.
It wasn't meant to hurt to see him.
But it did.
When she got scared && asked
Baby, Will you still love me in the morning?
He replied, he said yes.
He told her he loved her.
Maybe this time it'll be different.
She can't hurt anymore,
&& if it breaks again...
This time the pain would be a million and one
times worse. && she just can't
she wouldn't be able to survive.
She's planning for the year, && he's making her crazy.
She's doing all these things,
that she's not even in control of.
She just can't help it.
He said he loved her,
The wind whipping them && standing in the rain,
they came back together &&
he tilted her head up to his
to kiss her nose,
to run his hands through her hair.
He said he loved her,
&& now he's said it three times
&& she just can't help believing...
♥
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I hope this is okie sweetie, idk, i like it but i'm not sure, it's kinda confusion i guess && then love?
♥
Oh && it's loni...Over the rainbow--x
love you bby
♥
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I wuv you and yes, I've been through this, it always hurts when you think they're gone for good :[
its a relief when they come back though--:]

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I really really love this sweetie. I love the descriptions and the imagery. The feelings are so real and there's so much confusion in love. This is really beautiful bby.
♥ly♥

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Thanks bby, [=
Let's hope this time he's here to stay [=
Ly♥
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