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Frozen Memories Touched

New year,
    new life,
        new hope;
raining crystalline tears,
      frozen in memories

melting spirits;
    frosted disdain
chilled warmth
        whispering...

  ~ Peace ~

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Prompt contest: January Rain

20 words more or less meaning one over is okay not 10 over

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 9, 2007

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    Love the feeling of freedom found in your words. A wonderfully unique and creative write.
    Great imagery and metaphor.
    Thank you for entering!


  • Arizona Sunset
    December 9, 2007

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    awakening the frozen self ...setting the spirit free...wonderful take on the prompt...best to you in the contest