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Severing Family Ties

 

Smiling she watches her sire feast,
the pale corpse is now deceased.
Starting a rampage is always best,
listening to mortals scream and protest.

Hunger takes over, every single night,
they die in agony, much to your delight.
The next kill is yours for the taking,
in anticipation your body is shaking.

Looking down into pale terrified eyes
ignoring their pleas and their cries.
Seeing the fear stricken mummy dear,
facing her now is the ultimate in fear.

Now this dilemma, should you turn,
or kill and let their souls forever burn?
Hunger and thirst take over the whim,
killing for you is the only important thing.

Moving up to next on the agenda, dad.
Draining him swiftly, leaves you glad.
Shaking in a corner, last on the list,
white as a sheet, your angelic sweet sis.

A fleeting triumphant look as you leave,
of their empty lives you did relieve.
A sickly smile graces your beautiful face,
out there is more humanity to erase.

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  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    December 27, 2007

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    Wow.....i have to say, this is a VERY POWERFUL write but very dark, twisted and sadistic. AWWW YES, I LOVE YOUR MIND!
    Keep fuckin writing and MANY KUDOS


  • DantexyzSolarium
    December 15, 2007

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    Devilicious

    Obituary grotesque fall down from the human condition to the devil´s hands and how you finish is a perfect tip for what might be a surprise upon the wholy truth beyond this wandering life.
    Love it to the bones


  • Menace
    December 9, 2007
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    Hmm...

    I really can't laugh and point at this (and I enjoy that sorta thing). This was very descriptive and draws the reader in. The fourth stansa did throw me for a loop (breaking away from the rhyming), only to return in the next stansa. Good luck in the contest and I will take another look before judging.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 9, 2007
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    Another great Dark one


  • Arizona Sunset
    December 9, 2007

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO what is happening to my sissy! She has gone to the dark side love this...beautiful flow, love the language, and the imagery! ~Trisha~


  • CherryOnTop
    December 9, 2007
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    This is wild! Just as you are twisted. Great post my friend..

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