i feel so down,
when these boys mess me around,
it gets so hard,
to stand your ground.
but you learn from the first you have got to show them back.
that love is nothing without that love in the heart.
love is needed to help the relationship grow,
but when he messes around with that love,
you want the love back,
but don't know how.
it gets you down but you learn to stand your ground.
love is the seed but you have a stone,
you will have better chances,
and you will be treat good.
so don't give up,
just have a break,
and learn to tell them you too have a life.
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under - Mind Maze by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended December 14, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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This is sincere and I really love that about this piece. You can easily see yourself in these shoes. There's a great message to this piece as well. The flow could go a little better with some reworking here and there, but overall, I really do like this alot
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