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Thoughts for Margaret on her fiftieth birthday

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Thoughts for Margaret Gibson on her fiftieth birthday 

 

 

I know that reaching fifty can be tough,

having topped seventy years myself.

 

But you and I know there are Sundays

and December snow for you,

Christmas splashed with rain

and bright gardens for me.

 

Mondays, and green grasses wave to me here

but town squares with bazaars do beckon you.

 

Tuesdays, with cars, travel, cold, warm tables,

noises of traffic and bells for you

and blue echoed in blue skies down to blue seas

for me.

 

Wednesdays, husband and sons and meetings with you

but holidays of summer, no winter glories, for my wife and me.

 

Thursdays, like you, shopping for the 25th    is all the go.

I plod in cool air-conditioned comfort;

you plod in boots, thick coats, gloves, fur on the neck.

 

Fridays, and our week’s horizon’s  almost there.

 

You, in ambassadorial splendour, hostess supreme;

I, in singlet and shorts walking, king of the Range.

 

Saturday, time for a sonnet or two or three to spin against the years.

 

I to write such as this vers libre for a friend far-away

known to me intimately yet

not known at all.

 

Somehow, somewhere there is a voice telling me that this is not folly.

 

Think of that, Margaret, when the whole world becomes stranger than strange

yet more real than real like one’s Faith, I suppose. Yes … you could say that:

 

like one’s Faith.

    All rights reserved. Ron Wiseman, Mapleton, QLD, Australia. 9th Dec. 07.

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Facts about Margaret's Life in Kyiv will be rectified with promptings from her! This is my contest and this verse is not eligible for placement.

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  • maa gold member
    January 4, 2008

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    a masterful and soulful tribute to margaret from a poet with a big heart ... thank you for paying homage to my dear sister in such a wonderful manner ...

    wishing you and your family a blessed year 2008

    much love,

    marion

  • Vera Rich
    December 16, 2007

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    A really splendid tribute - though, I imagine Margaret will be shopping both for the 25th AND for the 7th January... since she is - at least at the moment, one of us for whom "Christmas comes round twice" a year!



    But PLEASE... may I point out that, in accordance with the decree of the Supreme Council (i.e. Parliament) of Ukraine, of 14 October 1994, the proper spelling in the Roman alphabet of the name of the capital city of Ukraine is KYIV!






    • Lyndon gold member
      December 16, 2007
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      Thank you Vera.

      And, yes, I have attended to the spelling.
      Two Christmases ~ poor Margaret!


  • Melodies
    December 16, 2007

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    Splendid, truly!

    A birthday message from one heart to another. Sweetly and sincerely penned.

  • ecrivain01
    December 15, 2007
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    Bravo ...

    and that's about all that need be said. I'm sure Margaret would agree.


  • angelica silver member
    December 11, 2007

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    Birthday greetings

    Dear Lyndon,
    beautifully written for our dear friend Margaret.
    sigh, I can remember when I turned fifty, so long ago I've stopped counting.
    G'DAY to you my fellow countryman
    I'm Sydney born and bred.
    Love Joan.


  • SEA angel gold member
    December 10, 2007

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    EXCELLENT

    I can see in your words that MargargetG holds an equally special place in your heart too. God Bless You and Margaret and our friendships and all those dear to us.


  • Mystical-Gardenia
    December 10, 2007

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    Excellent!

    Your mantel of words are filled with the joy of wonderful horizons yet to come and your admiration and friendship become the wand waved with your skill and talent this has got to be one of Margarets most memorable birthdays gratis to your thoughtfulness May your days be filled with the joy you work to bring to others


  • MargaretG
    December 9, 2007

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    These are good thoughts;

    a birthday is one day among many, most of them crammed with the minutiae of living. Our lives are different, though perhaps at 50 you had similar concerns of shopping and society.
    I smiled at "ambassadorial splendour", that is funny for the Canadian diplomatic corps, bound in budgets; but it is a nice contrast to the King of the Range.
    Above all, your poem reminds me that tempests come and go, and after a few days even the worst is contained in a teapot. Life is good, every day of it.
    Thank you Ron, these are good thoughts.

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