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Peace Forever

Carols and hymns
sung in peace
a time when fighting
seems to cease.

Jingle bells
replace the guns
serenity
the day has won.

Children's laughter
clears the air
when often their tears
show lack of care.

This season
when our saviour came
a place for all
He did proclaim.

Yet shouts of anger
and war's fiery flames
brings in focus
earthly shame.

Every day
harmony should reign
get off the wheel
of vanity's pain.

Bequeath to our children
a world of peace
where truly happiness
has release.





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  • Dobbie73rip
    December 12, 2007
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    Amen

    This is beautiful.Keep up the good writting.


  • islekine gold member
    December 9, 2007
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    Beautifully penned.

    Wonderful sentiments. Thanks for entering!
    Write on!
    *PEACE*


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 9, 2007

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    this is such a beautiful piece which holds so much within your words of peace and dreams. well done and best of luck


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    December 9, 2007

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    A world of peace, it is a dream we all hold in our hearts... just beautiful, if only it was a perfect world hun.. if only.... goodluck in this contest hun

    Karen