Hello my darlings
I've been waiting to talk.
Here all along.
Just hiding,
being shoved aside.
What else could I do about it?
I'm here now, off and on.
Do you really think she is the one
who goes beserk in anger?
You know her well enough
to see that I was the one controlling it.
She sat there waiting for you
waiting for some recognition that you cared,
and you gave her nothing.
I had to step in.
Ahh,
such a lovely night my darlings.
after the fight that is.
A lovely night indeed.
I shall never forget it,
but someone will.
Should I?
or should I just let them deal with it?
A girl will feel the pain
because fear is it's best friend.
Foolish mortal.
Author notes
Weird freaking name...I know.. she can't even say it right. It has to be stated here that 'foolish mortal' is not meant for me ie: Kasey.
Comments
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I like your approach with this piece. Like a split personality thing. Reminds me of LOTR. This was different than your other work and it flowed very nicely.I am probably missing the objective, however, good work should not go unrecognized. You have an interesting style to your writing, I have noticed, and this is the first time I think it may have appealed to me. Good job. Keep up the good work!!
-EmilyRose
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