His thrill-seeking,
a desire to fulfill
a sinful urge
Mysterious and desirable,
his blue skin
and awesome powers
of teleportation
can only add
temptation to his game
He bamfs around
from bed to bed
enjoying the passions
of many women
This German freak
and sexual chic
could show up at your door
and leave you
begging for more
as he bamfs around
until his next conquest
Author notes
The "bamf" comes from the comic books. Apparently, his teleportation makes that sound. I thought it sounded kind of kinky, the possibility of Nightcrawler bamfing you. Here's an example:
http://www.takeshimiyazawa.com/uploaded_images/nightcrawler-722640.jpg
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Comments
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Quite kinky, I agree! Would like to see this a bit longer. I think you were going somewhere with this, but there's just a general descriptive of womanizing.
I felt the second stanza showed much promise giving some physical details and showing how he is a "temptation". Blue -
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Thanks for letting me enter, I had a lot of fun with the theme. I'm sorry that more people didn't enter, I thought they'd jump at a chance to write some sexy super-hero grit poetry. hah, best of luck. Cheers
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