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Rolling Thunder

Upon the valley of disease
falls the January blood
and here the  darkness calls
in rolling thunder -
brute of pain

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 9, 2007

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    WOW! Now this was very creative and dark take on the prompt. Excellent work.
    Love the metaphor.
    Thank you for entering!