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summer rain

laughter ripples through the rain


clothes clung to curves puddled


passion simmers in summer rain


as toes strain in the mud

Author notes

I know January is winter rain for you but lately it ahs been summer for me

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 9, 2007

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    LOL...okay the summer thing really throw me off for January...but as you explained in your comment...I forget the January is not winter for all.
    Beatiful done, love the imagery.
    Thank you for entering!


  • myrataal silver member
    December 9, 2007

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    Wondrous Work, Poet ...

    do I sense a Summer connection?

    Love
    Myra