The Chime
breaking the stillness in the air.
What beauty fair
depicts her tapestry?
Before a setting sun
that ends this Winter's pain.
Oh January Rain...
Author notes
I want to say sry for not having 20 words, its 25, (that was for the contest) The meaning of this poem is for the reader to find most appropiate for themselves (^.') so this poem has multiple meanings
A contest entry
- PIF Prompt Contest by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended December 9, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hm...well, what do think really, an honest opinion of what you think of the poem and what you think it means.
Comments
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Beautiful write! I love the title and the choice of words used! Thanks so much for yet another brilliant share! Well, off to read more now! Next up is something with December in the name!
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!!!!????!!??!!?!!?! now i really wanna know what you meant. well, good job on it C:
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25 words is fine...thank you for stating so though.
Well said write...leaving one to ponder. I see the rain as cleansing and the end of the winter, bringing the beauty of spring and new life back.
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