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Crazy





keep on dripping
crazy rain
a cardiac beat
moments of exasperation
thunders
old acquaintances
something insecure,
many memories
surprise me.















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January Rain

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 9, 2007

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    Love the ending...funny how so memories triggered to suprise us.
    Lovely imagery and deeply thought provoking.
    Thank you for entering!