heart shattered
lifes piercing sorrows
malicious words
broken dreams
sorrows abound
hearts' riven
but the march of time
and sheer determination
imperceptibly
conciliates
shattered dreams
stitch by stitch
the chasm is closed
....but that...
will leave a scar.......
Author notes
just a contest poem boys and girls......... I am fine.
A contest entry
- Saturday Night Fun 2 by Arizona Sunset.
1025 points, ended December 9, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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this is really deep...i love the imagery...could really feel the pain...
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this is a wonderfully wrin poem which really captures the emotion that i am sure many can relate to. well done and congrats on the honary
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I love the poem that you wrote here, excellent emotional poem, and imagery,. thank you for your entry into my contest ~blessings always~
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great write. best of luck in the contest
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