I don't need your apologies,
or you to come hold my hand.
I can fix it all on my own,
watch, and you'll see I can.
Why would I need you now,
you were never there for me.
I don't need you back at all,
I'll fix it all alone, you'll see.
Don't try to fix it, go away,
I want you to leave me alone.
Please just walk out the door,
I know I can fix it on my own.
A contest entry
- Saturday Night Fun 2 by Arizona Sunset.
1025 points, ended December 9, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very good poem. very poweful and emotional. It has a great choice of vocab. Well done in the contest and on the poem. Keep writing!
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I love the poem that you wrote here, frustration sets the tone and determination. I like when I can feel the emotions and imagery of a poem...thank you for your entry into my contest ~blessings always~
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ight ill just send u the bill lol
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i can relate no doubt. love the way u worded this
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I really like this. I've actually felt this way alot. good job. later.
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