A life time of heartache
And I vomited pain
Only to experience
Such a relieving Sunday rain
You were never the one
To bring me joy
Not a true, sky sun
I was just a toy!
And so I sat
Needle in hand
[Crazy as a bat]
Because you don't understand
My heart was hurt..
After you're treatment
I was pushed in dirt
I was just translucent
So I sat
And sewed my heart
[Crazy as a bat]
After you tore it apart
Author notes
Dedicated to all the Steven's and James McKena's i've had in my life.
because..
boys can destroy you.
you have to find yourself
to build back your
foundation.
A contest entry
- Saturday Night Fun 2 by Arizona Sunset.
1025 points, ended December 9, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very powerful write and can be very true. Makes me think of my lost chance at love back in October 2006, you know the story there. Need I say more? lol.
Anyway, great write with lots of emotion expressed. Congrats on the honorable trophy.
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I love the poem that you wrote here, great depth, and determination in the poem, loved the imagery. thank you for your entry into my contest ~blessings always~
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thank you for the HM! =]
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the tear down does suck, but rebuilding is a great value. wonderful write, i loved it
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