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catch me as I fall

so cold out tonight
where has everyone gone?
at least it's warm here
wherever I am.

fighting with what feels like sheets
binding me to myself
kicking, struggling
nothing works.

can't see
I blink and blink
why is it so damn dark?

getting worried
beginning to fear my unknown surroundings
what's going on?
what has happened
and why does it feel like I'm falling
down into a bottomless hole
[will you ever catch me?]

whatchu think? :D

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  • Sick Inside
    December 13, 2007

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    Ooh wow, I love it! I want this one put on a poster and sold in stores. Ahh, love it Mad. Awesome.