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Love's Melancholy Angel

I peer over the edge of the cliff,
wings, quivering.
nervous yet excited,
so many attempts,
never, the courage.
never, my time.
the waves crash below,
whisking away the shoreline.
one grain of sand, at a time.
the seagulls crie out,
in melancholy, songs.
they've seen this before.
so many before me,
now laying, in thier never ceasing, grave.
a breeze hits,
my wings carry me.
i begin to take flight.
thier perpetual songs,
silenced.
expressions are stolid.
i start to fall,
i hear her speak.
my angel's here.
though my flight has, ceased.
my life is only begining.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 9, 2007
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    This is truely a heart warming description of the heart where you defined the story of the love in melodious words ..this is a sweet poem touching the sentiments of the true lover here descrining the scanario of the loveful heart..I love this piece..you did a wonderful job here..thanks for sharing this write..well done...