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Always

Forever
means nothing.
Forever
ends when we cease to exist.
When the world comes to a close.
When we are no longer a whole,
but separate.
The promise of forever
is the promise of an eventual ending.
How I feel about you
is Always.
Infinite.
Ceaseless.
Endless.
I will hate you
Always.

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ok so this is kind of misleading and also i am not sure if i like the ending. it could also be
"I will love you always"
constructive comments would be appreciated, as always. thanks for reading!
<3 kitty

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  • BleedingKittii
    December 14, 2007

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    It kinda fits to the hate you side since you're talking about the ending...the being caught in forever and there's a sort of sarcastic tone to it like it's a bitter ending that you can't wait to arrive. <33

  • PersuingHappyness
    December 9, 2007
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    so its a love hate relationship........

    I so get you lol