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Twas the night before Christmas

Twas the night before Christmas,
And all through the house
Creepy creatures were leeching
Hah, even a louse
They'll suck all your blood when you're never aware
And gorge full of food for their babies to share

The children looked tasty, that blood in their heads,
Unconcious and cold from too many meds
And mama in her 'kerchief, and I in my cap
Remain two more sources for creatures to tap

Author notes

Merry Christmas. I'm sorry, but the thought came and I felt all too tempted.

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  • Sokarjo
    June 15
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    Hehehe, fantastic! Love the icky creepiness!


  • hugs and kissies
    December 21, 2008
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    creepy thank you for entering my contest and good luck


  • Dalaney gold member
    December 13, 2008
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    lol....

    sorry...I must have the same sense of humor

    Love, Lane


  • mystic-angel gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    Wow! A real nightmare before Christmas! Brilliantly written and so creepy. I love it. Thanks for your entry and good luck.

  • The Inc
    February 15, 2008

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    UGH! How repulsive, but I must say, this is
    certainly one that cannot be overlooked. lol.
    You really know how to get attention don't you?


    Thank you for sharing your unique poem.
    Keep penning!

    ~The INC."


  • candyhamilton
    February 15, 2008
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    omg i loed this - compltly for me - i love tim burton so you can call me a fan of your as well now

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