Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Fuck Them

Them

Through pain
Through suffering
I never gave up
Through the bipolar fog I am sane

Through every single fight
Through all the bitching
I was strong
Through all the scars of pain I flew like a kite

Through the backstabbing and lies
Through all the times I ran away from it all
I held myself together
Through all betrayal I was able to look to the sunny skies

Through many sleepless nights
Through hopeless nights
I never let my grip on life slip
Through it all I have reached new heights

Through all the tears
Through all the guilt
I rose from the darkness
Through the darkness I conquered my fears

Through it all
Through all the stumbles and hurdles
I have picked my self up
Through it all, I have stood tall
Through every fall

Through the years
Through the pain I have caused
They stood strong
Determined to dry all my tears


A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • DancingQueenAngi
    June 11, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    This poem is still really rough. Keep revising!
    ~Angi


  • Stickboy gold member
    December 25, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    AWWWWWWWWWW yes stand strong dear poet! You can do this i feel your determination through your words, Thanks for sharing this
    Sean

  • jameswadlow
    December 21, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    the self determination i can see, tempered by pain, can strengthen you so much. krystal is specific to the poem you saw, and thank you for noticing me.

    i tend to blog out my feelings, and always try to leave em smiling (even if i fail miserably). but your toughness and tenderness shows thru here. congrats


  • freebutsafe
    December 21, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Thank-you so much for sharing this....an image I know well. Good on you for being strong. The hardest thing here is knowing we do it alone...
    From one alone to another....Have a great day!