This darkness
takes me
holds me in it's cold arms.
Holds me close,
bestows me with it charms.
Taking hold of my inner pain,
possessing my soul of its essence,
seducing me to sin.
Silence,
overtaking poisonous words,
my wants, needs;
swallows my past, my deeds
emptying me into an abyss,
ripped and torn.
Submerging my existence,
of my ever being born.
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Awesome!
Tanya,
You ave done a brilliant job in bringing this picture to life, which I would have had a hard time writing for as well. Kinda like a odd union between good and evil
I was inspired by your imagination on a difficult piece to write for.
I love the following...
"Holds me close,
bestows me with it charms.
Taking hold of my inner pain,
possessing my soul of its essence,
seducing me to sin....swallows my past, my deeds
emptying me into an abyss,
ripped and torn.
Submerging my existence,
of my ever being born"
I fell this deeply and you shown it well
BRavo!
Thank you soooo much for your entry
I wish you the very best in the contest!
Many blessings for the holidays,
~David~
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Wow. Kinda blown me out of the water with this fantastic poem
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Manda
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