Falling Standing Up
I tempted and I rushed
This is the last reply
I'm coming out,
With a back burn on my mind
A Modest Memory
This heart of mine
Sitting in debris
Come on, fall down
Get up
The second chance is done
Sleeping on the clock
Wake up
Here comes another one
I Beg You
To put me on your doorstep
I'd be happy for a month
Then we would loose touch
It just plain sucks
Kicking and keeping
It all inside
And at the same time
Out of luck
I didn't want
To ask too much
Guitars, On Hold
Volume, gets old
My hands, broken
The bone is open
She's better off sleeping on the floor…
You Make me Sick to the Core
I can't come back here any more
What I, pull out of my memory
I'll put it back, modestly
Then maybe I can just
Slam the door
It's better Ignored
Who am I Kidding?
I can't retract
At least not very fast
Too bad
The lights are out
Standing Up
Falling Down
Author notes
Okay okay...This was inspired by Blink 182 (Kicking booty band by the way...)
I did use one line from one of their ditty's..
"She's better off sleeping on the floor..." The rest was totally me. But I hope you liked it. Thought I'd be the first to enter
I have to admit its not my best though.
Honk. Honk.
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I do like it! My favourite part is the second stanza.. or verse as you might call it I also like the line you used throughout the poem about standing up and falling down.. it pretty much sums up life with it's ups and downs! Thanks very much for entering this into the contest, good luck!
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WAhhh
Gracias young fahita. I thankyou for the lovely comment and I'm glad you liked the 2nd stanza.....Wow thats a lot of dots. Thanks!
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Who am I Kidding?
I can't retract
At least not very fast
Too bad
The lights are out
Standing Up
Falling Down
Well this is the life and this what the heart is ..neither in control nor it obeys..you are very honest while describing your innocent love here..This is inded a difficult to handle or to maintain with
the heart..a peaculiar stage of love..you did a wonderful job here..I love this piece..thank you so much for sharing such a heartfelt poem..well done...
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