Teardrops fall shattered off her tearstained face
With haunting eyes she looks the pictures
That once held so meny cherished memories
Now only hold sharp heartbreaking pain
Slivers of glass cut through her heart
Watch as she bleeds crimson from her heart
And from her desperate eyes
As she slowly rips the pictures in pieces
Can you hear her agonized cries?
Why does this hurt so bad
End this pain please end these tears
Crystal teardrops will fall for a long time
Through she won’t give up
This shattered glass, this shattered heart
Will mend again
Author notes
i hope this is ok
# Glass teardrops
~~~not true feelings~~~
A contest entry
- Make me feel dark and emotional. Lots of options!! by Kia Tenshi.
600 points, ended December 13, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you really think
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Beautiful angel wow very touching i love it
Good luck i love you
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Crystal teardrops will fall
I'm wondering why I never thought of something like this. Wonderful! -
wow this is a really emotional peice that really captures the reader within your words. well done auntie
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awwwww
You are very good at writing sad poems and making me feel the pain. Very touching. Good use of words. I love you princess Emma, Mark
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So very sad. Beautifully written. I love it.
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Crystal teardrops will fall for a long time
Through she won’t give up
This shattered glass, this shattered heart
Will mend again
I love this piece it is sad but nicely written
Goodluck in the contest
much love
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