Missing you oh so much but remembering how you faired
You watched us grow and sat and waited and showed us how much you cared
We would swim till the night grew old
You sat there watching the fun unfold
Eventually having to leave the fun
end up staying up all night until the day was done
Holidays certainly were special
You decorated every thresh hold
never was the tinsel out of place
after Christmas dinner Us you would chase
Times oh so fun
Im running out of rhymes so now this poem is done
MERRY CHRISTMAS
A contest entry
- HAPPY CONTEST. My first contest only 1 rule! must rhyme. by K1r5ty.
900 points, ended December 29, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
constructive critizism welcome
Comments
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loved it!! thank you for entering my contest and good luk!!!!
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you spek well of your family
you are a gem of a chil writter. you are growing as i watch.If I had a magic wan I would gentlely touch you.
Grace becomes you....mac
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