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Restlessness

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I've danced forever;
temperance bound
under this vestal spell,

a captive in these conventions of virtue,
in these endless circles
of same guiding same,
someone else's expectations
deciding my every step.

All the while I entertain
the restless riots building within.

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  • Naridill gold member
    December 11, 2007

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    Very enthralling, I like this, its different and its captivating. Very beautiful and yet sad.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.