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Da Cappo al Fine

I. 

relationships, like fff

thats fortissimo, babe

first few days (weeks) (months) hit you like the shock of cold when you step outside in the middle of January

there's that anticipation, that fluttering in your stomach

the butterflies playing animato e vivace on your rib cage

 

II.

molto misterioso

the world revolves around you and him (her)

it lies at your feet

awaiting your beck and call

 

III.

decrescendo, like a hurricane tapering into a soft rain

you're comfortable with things now

happy

content

 

IV.

lentissimo, grave

like the end (HA!) of a Mahler symphony

the heart wrenching pain never seems to go away

he (she) left you for someone else

doloroso

fine

Author notes

if you want me to explain all the musical terms (everything in italics) please let me know

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  • grass
    December 21, 2007

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    this is lovely! it's got some soul! the first two sections are the best, though. thanks for the stellar entry.


  • Brucie
    December 9, 2007
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    Interesting

    What a great metaphor! It fits perfectly. Beautiful ;-)

    • pointlessdayz
      December 9, 2007
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      thank you! i was worried that maybe people wouldnt get it if I didnt explain the musical terms, but eh... they can IM me if they want to know.