A loner is all I am
All I’ll ever be,
All I’ve known.
I'm the only one,
As I leave
I walk alone.
Even surrounded
I’m all alone,
I can never escape.
Being alone,
To live
I walk alone.
As my heart yearns
For something more,
Than this kind of life.
It will never happen,
I’m a loner always will be
I must walk alone.
No matter what
I’m always alone,
Even when I don’t try to be.
It’s how I end up,
Walking my own
Empty abandoned streets.
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I think you did a good job writing this piece. I really liked it, it displays the character but I also sense it reflects you as well. Good luck to you in the contest.
~~Tori~~
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wolverine is my favorite x-men
i just think he's the coolest. metal skeleton and everything!! wow.....he can kick anybody's *changed to protect the virgin eyes of the viewers* butt. -
I can believe this is how Wolverine feels. Tell you what, if you will change “then” to than” in “As my heart yearns
For something more
Then this kind of life”…………………..and put in some periods and/or commas, I’ll be able to review this for you. Thanks.
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Nice choice of words.
Nice choice of words.I give you credit for it.You might even win the contest.Maybe.
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i like it reminds me how i feel sometimes
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