Those that
place trust
in three little
words, and cling to smiles
Those that
never tend to think twice...
If they did they'd
realize that It's pretend
When all is
said and done.
It all comes down
to a quick how's your father
In a list
A contest entry
- Sweetie, This Is What Broken Looks Like. by Heartbeatsxfading.
600 points, ended May 20, 2008, 39 entries
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Comments
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good write
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argh... another good poem
"Those that
place trust
in three little
words, and cling to
smiles and winks
like safety ropes. "
loved it
XXX he broke me
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good poem your words grabbed my interest and held me till the end. a very cool ending line too
it could be taken a couple of different ways. i like the flexibility of it
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thank you hun
s
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i loved the way this poem flowed together.this was a verry moving. checkout my poems and tell me what you think.
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wow!
this is strong, and i loved it, it goes together so well...seem hurt?...but i don't blame you.
this is a wonderful poem though!
=]
brillant
stephanie
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thank you sweeties
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