It cascades downwards,
Shimmering in the sunlight,
Moving ere onwards,
Flowing unceasingly, life.
By, Chaz D. Wolf
A contest entry
- Quadraphor Challenge IV by sheltered.
525 points, ended December 10, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I am liking this a lot.
You do have an extra syllable in line three.
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There its fixed! lol. Thanks for the comment.
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