I love to hear your laughter
in the darkness of the night
and see your hair glow softly
in the luminous moonlight
with lips of an angel
and a smile I love to know
such kindness in your heart
how I love to watch you grow
moments spent with you
they always melt my heart
you know I've always loved you
from the very start
so even as time goes passing by
my love for you will never die
Author notes
This is a dedication to my 6 yr old daughter, Kiya
A contest entry
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Aww thats soo sweet. Your daughter must feel very special
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This is a sweet and precious dedication to your sweet little girl. I am sure she will always treasure these beautiful words which were written straight from your heart, just for her. How special! Thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty
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This is a beautiful portrayal of a mother's love. It's touching for its sincerity, and it flows wonderfully. You may want to put this aside for a while and read it again after a bit so that you can make some revisions on the rhythm. The rhythm flows but could be even better. A beautiful write. Thanks for entering.
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this is a wonderful tribute to your daughter, i love the rhyming and the flow its nice, our children do grow up way too fast, as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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this is so wonderful. It made me want to cty.
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I think this is beautiful!
Reminds me of my own precious daughters
Nothing in the world is as precious a gift as a child and you wrote this so beautifully; so tenderly
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Thank you Heavenly Angel for such nice words. You are right, children are a precious gift from God. I hope you are doing well. Thanks again.
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