And as we grow together
gossamer ribbons of pure silk
will fuse into the beauty of life
like the first unfurling flower
on a dawn-fresh day
and your gaze
will wrap around my heart
til I cannot breathe
anything but love
for you
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A contest entry
- PIF...5th Contest by Spiritualangel...10x10 by spiritualangel.
415 points, ended December 8, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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so exquisitly beautiful!
each word special
well done
jingl -
Beautiful thoughts - could be about anyone, but especially a child. I resonate with "first unfurling flower", and I love the alliteration too.
Congratulations for your trophy!
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This is beautiful and each word is so perfectly chosen and placed!!!!! Simply beautiful!!!!! I love this piece!!!!!!!
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am glad you enjoy this one!!
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Brilliant great words.
Best of luck. -
A stunningly beautiful poem that touchs the mind and heart like the brush of an angel's wing--excellent.
Bill
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awww...I love this, I love the ribbon imagery..my daughter did not sleep the whole first night she was born, just stayed awake and looked at me..a gaze that definately wraps around the heart like a beautiful silk...this poem reminds me so much of that night.thank you..a beautiful poem!
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