There he is
Sitting next to me
Not talking at all
Just watching...
When he speaks
He talks of others
Not about me
He talks about you
He talks about her
About every other girl thats
Better than me
He shuts me out
I'm by myself
Listening to the voice
Crowding my thoughts
Splitting my mind
Go ahead and say
What you have to say
Because you know i'll listen
To the wonderful voice
Cause I can't stay away
I love you so much
Please just tell me,
That I'm the one you want,
you care of,
The one You love
The one you're talking about...
First one, Bad or good?
Comments
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Wow, that was good!!!! I loved it. You're so talented Kaye!!!
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Hi! Hope you enjoy AP I enjoyed it. The poem is simply brilliant and attractive not rhythmic but seems so. Sequence, flow of words and simply describing your heart makes the poem attractive. I liked it and it was in real charming and awesome not well that I say that perfect but as a starter it's quite lovely. and yeah love is mad you running before the mist and all but we should always hope for the best. Good Luck! (change your colour combination it is at spaces just invisible)
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