I am cocooned in winter’s wrap
pinned on by stars
that were the names of ancestors
singing soft hymns
in midnight’s hour
A walk in tiny particles
dissolving at first touch, first kiss,
first skin they sought to land upon
and I am blessed
In a list
A contest entry
- 12 hour Winter Quickie by poet2angels.
475 points, ended December 9, 2007, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh my I am just so touched by this poem...
As always, I am amazed at how you can express so much emotion and say so much in so few lines....True talent is the answer
Amazing stuff here
Lynda
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That is how I feel on a dark night, when the snow is twirling around on a slight breeze and all the world is still. ty for the bronze.
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We receive the seasons, when we let them shine in our hearts, they glow for those we share them with. No matter the time or season, our love for life brings blessings for every heart it touches no matter the season of their life.
Love, Tom B.
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so true...there is such spiritual beauty in all...
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"dissolving at first touch, first kiss,
first skin it sought to land upon
and I am blessed"
Indeed, you are...& you bless us with your presence, as well. Good luck in Lynda's contest, my dear Friend. Wanda
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aw, ty girlfriend... what storm there is, I msut find beauty there....
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You are blessed alright. What a beautiful vision you have shared with us. A peek into your soul...
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ty ithica..... it is true that nature in its all...truly inspires me, touches me...and yes, in the end of any of it, blesses me.
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This is Beautiful Dear
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ty, dear heart, when the world or my little old self gets all chaotic, all I need is a quiet few moments with Creator and an open ear to the whisperings.
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