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Sensual Haiku

Celestial lovers
Ever loving sanctuary
Always, we are one.

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For my boyfriend and lover. <3

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  • Wolfgirl Blues
    April 4, 2008
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    Beautiful! I love it ^_^

  • deleteit
    December 10, 2007
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    oh wow, this is really good! It speaks volumes of the heart in love, excellent job!


  • Phoenix Karkadann
    December 10, 2007
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    This is beautiful, the tale of love! Well done, this is a very well written haiku!

    Phoenix


  • Pink Absinthe
    December 8, 2007
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    rawr!!!
    me lovey; very different from the Kenaz I first met!! me likey =] xxx