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JUST A FEW MONTHS BACK IN TIME by efhjr.

JUST A FEW MONTHS BACK IN TIME (c) Copyright 2007 by Earl F. Hubbard Jr.
(from ON THE ROAD, AGAIN coming SOON!)

We played UNCLE EARL,
on our new calliope,
songs that came from Waterloo,
made in Tennessee.

We were flying on to Florida,
from a very snowy state,
back in time to Summer,
and we couldn't wait.

JoAnne said she needed,
to get a bathing suit,
a "Teeny Tiny Micro",
OH SO SEXY and SO CUTE!

OH, all the girls would get one,
OH, even Suzy Q,
to the delight of playboy Dillon,
who said she's HOT and COOL!

Pyper Rain and Passion,
really lit my fire,
Sunshine Girl and Michelle,
took me even HIGHER!

Cara Lou and Lily,
were drop dead gorgeous, too,
as well as brave Fiona,
in her topless bathing suit.

Still, Saffron won the contest,
She's always fit and tan!
She's a lot like Granny,
for she always gets her man!

Hilly loved Miami,
and the young men at the beach!
As she waked with Sammy,
she was redder than a peach!

That's where we met a beauty,
we called Victoria,
playing Volley Ball,
with the golden Gloria.

Hilly found a man,
to take her on a date!
All the children laughed (and said),
"Time travel's really GREAT!"

efhjr.

Author notes

This is the TWENTY SECOND piece for what will be my 24th book and the third book in my YELLOW BUS of PEACE & LOVE series of books of which I have 4 of planned - if all goes well. As with my LITTLE STAR books - my YELLOW BUS books are meant to be read from the first page to the last like the chapters of a novel.
ENJOY!
Peace & Love!
Earl.

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  • onesugar silver member
    December 11, 2007

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    Hiya dudee now we are where mickey mouse lives, can you drop me off at Disney World please, lol. Love Lilya

    what's this about you getting beat at a snowball fight? lol

  • onesugar silver member
    December 9, 2007
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    Hi matey, It sounds just like the tardis in DR WHO! what a fab time we are having, we might be going to Floria at the end of next year all being well, can't wait. I'm liking all the ladies in their swimming costumes lol. Stay cool, matey keep them coming and us smiling Love Dionte xxx

    Hi Earl, Yey! we have made it to Florida before the end of next Year, WICKED, what fun we are having what with snowball fights and now sunning ourselve, brill. Looking forward to our next stop. Love mars bar xxx

  • Lily otv
    December 8, 2007

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    Time travel is great as we are getting about all over the place in no time at all. The magic bus must be working overtime if it made me look drop dead gorgous but I'm not going to argue over it. I've been to Florida and boy was it hot! but to go there from Alaska is a real shock to the body. I'm surprised we weren't all topless but perhaps that would have been just too overwhelming for the locals lol


  • moonbumps silver member
    December 8, 2007

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    Ahhh...too much sun of course...I like a gradual tan.
    Sammy was sweet and very cheeky...Of course it didn't take me long to find a hunky date...that little black dress does it every time magical man!

  • Riftkin gold member
    December 8, 2007

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    Oh you are sweeter than any Uncle Earl
    for you are our sunshine on life's cloudy day
    Thinking about past tides
    and dreaming of the future
    Earl you are what makes
    each and everyone of us
    smile from ear to ear

    Joann

  • Pyper Rain
    December 8, 2007

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    Hmmmm...the sun, feels nice. Such a contrast to Alaska, but you know I ain't complainin!!!

    Where in the world will you take us next?

    ~B.


  • onesugar silver member
    December 8, 2007
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    Thank heavens for time travel LOL!!! yey! you can't beat the warmth of the sun on ya back, no matter how much fun you are having in the snow. Who is playing the steam whistle organ? Uncle Earl don't stand a chance do da do da....When we getting back to the snow? LOL!!!
    Fab read
    Love you ~sugar~ xxx


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 8, 2007
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    Alaska to florida what a trip wooow wee. Florida is my favorite state. i love this write Earl


  • sunshinegirl
    December 8, 2007

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    Earl,

    AWWWWWWWWW, some warmth finally! LOL, love it!! What a great read this one is!! This is fun! Thank heavens for the warmth when it is soooooooo cold! hehe.

    and love

    Nyetta

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