It's chilly glistening eve
My love and I walk though the crisp snow
To his every word I cleave
Tonight everything is aglow
We enjoy this time alone
No hustling and bustling not much of a sound
As we approach the large pine left alone
The emotions are almost profound
This fir placed here when small
On our first winters walk
I stop and ponder when he grew tall
Every year in the cold come here and talk
A contest entry
- 12 hour Winter Quickie by poet2angels.
475 points, ended December 9, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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Such a sweet memory and warmth this must bring!
"This fir placed here when small
On our first winters walk
I stop and ponder when he grew tall
Every year in the cold come here and talk"
TY for entering
Lynda
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