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Walking In A Slayer's Wonderland

Over the ground lays a fountain of blood,
A hell-ground of fluid here as a flood,
Two hearts a-ripping,
Spite of the death in the season,
Love has no season,
Ended in time,
Romance is dead and ripped up for all time,
Blood is a-flowing,
Life is now going together,

Death bells ring,
Are ya listenin?
In the lane,
Bodies glistenin,
A sadist's delight,
We're ecstatic tonight,
Walkin' In A Slayer's Wonderland,

Ran away,
Has our killer,
Here to stay,
Is his dinner,
A cannibal's lunch,
Bones all go crunch,
Walking In A Slayer's Wonderland,

In the meadow we can build a casket,
We can all pretend that it's a crate,
They'll say are you sadists,
We'll say no ma'm,
But you can do the job when you're in town,

Later on,
By the pyre,
Add more bones,
To our fire,
To face unafraid,
Scary plans we have made,
Walking in a Slayer's Wonderland

No more to be said,
Cause everyone's dead,
Walking In A Slayer's Wonderland



Author notes

Walking In A Winter Wonder Land
NB: I have used the songs original beginning which many donnot know!
I love this piece

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 16, 2007
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    A fantastic job, chilling, best of luck in the contest


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 10, 2007

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    G'Day mate

    Strong visual write that had me chilled to the bone but loving every minute of it

    Fabulous write!
    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • jcat gold member
    December 9, 2007

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    Nice job!!!! This was awesome...I am glad you left the author notes cause the beginning of this song had me confused so now you have me intrigued and I need to know the original form..... EXCELLENT work here!!! Good luck in the contest!!


  • MusiquedeMonCoeur
    December 8, 2007

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    wow...i am so listening to the death bells..(cus i'm ringin' em) but it was awesome and bloody!! keep writing!!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 8, 2007

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    What do I think? Awesome and fabtastic, done a fab, fab job with it. Best of luck


  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    December 8, 2007
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    WOW

    YAY! THIS WAS AMAZINg!!!!
    KUDOS!
    I wish you the best


  • quack silver member
    December 8, 2007

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    im listening to the death bells ring
    i love your poem
    love rhianna


  • NyteShade
    December 8, 2007
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    Thanks for entering. Good Luck


  • Dmonik
    December 8, 2007
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    Thanks for your entry. I shall read it thoroughly upon judging.

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